Sorry if things are going a little fast, it's just supposed to be broken parts of a memory.
So going off from the first page, I'll begin by stating yet again, that I do NOT normally like OC's, but Its usually the romantic ones that are the worst, so I thought I would give a shot by giving him sibling to try and make an interesting story.
Skwisgaar said that he grew up poor (I heard that in a interview or at least he said he had to eat snow or whatever)
I'm not sure what european customs are in Sweden, but I'm guess that Skwisgaar is around 14-15 or so here, but she's only 9. They're going through some hard times and there's the buzzing around of a certain agency of the welfare persuasion.
I wanted to introduce the breaking point between Skwisgaar and his mother and his feelings towards her behavior and the fate of his sister.
Next one will be Young Skwisgaar and Serveta ( Depending on whether or not I continue)
Tell me what you think please